pretty good
Try putting some (quiet) music in the background during the animation. . . Keep the sound effects etc. but music too . . It helps keep the viewer interested. long quiet passages are boring (wait! Is that a gay joke I just made?)
pretty good
Try putting some (quiet) music in the background during the animation. . . Keep the sound effects etc. but music too . . It helps keep the viewer interested. long quiet passages are boring (wait! Is that a gay joke I just made?)
Not bad . . . . . But
Some constructive criticism . .
Add some other graphics to go with your preloader bar. . . It's a bit boring.
The motion of the main snow scene . .. Too slow!!! Way too slow!! Speed it up by at least 50%
Apart from that - it was pretty good. I liked it.
Heeere . . . . Weeeee . . . . Gooooooo!!!!
What a load of SHIT!!!
Some senior should slam your testicles in a drawer to teach you a lesson . . . . STAY AWAY FROM FLASH BECAUSE YOU HAVE NO TALENT AND NO SENSE OF HUMOR YOU TWERP!!!!!!
Use a fuckin' PRELOADER!!!
Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy! Jimmy!
That was not good, mate!!
Not Funny!
Pissweak!
Not bad . . . . . . Not good either
Not too bad a rip-off of Foamy. . . . But how much talent does it take to copy a couple of graphics from a foamy flash and put your own speeded-up voice over it? NOT MUCH!!
Use your talent in other areas. . . . Imitation is the most sincere form of flattery.
Put in a PRELOADER fer chrissake!!
Animation style - OK
Subject matter - Fuckin' BORING!
Voices - Shitty
Overall - pretty shitful
Excellent!!!
I am sure you will be 'flush' with success!!
That was a golden nugget in amongst the piles of shit that are submitted every day to NG.
I wish you would make lots more of these. . . I LOVED IT!!
Needs sound for the voices
It would be much better if you had voices instead of speech balloons
Too slow!!!
Good . . . . but way too slow !!!
Age 60, Male
Engineer
Singapore
Joined on 3/7/03